My poem, Downriver, is now up at Carte Blanche for all (some, few, one) to see. As so often happens, there are some finicky changes I'd like, mostly to reflect my initial submission, so I wrote them a letter about it. The most important changes:
1. (Dorwin Falls, Rawdon, Quebec) is not a part of the title, but a subtitle. It should be under the title, Downriver, and in italics. (Actually, too, I asked them to eliminate "Rawdon". That the falls happen to be in or near the town of Rawdon, I now realize, is rather unnecessary information...)
2. In line 8 from the end, the word "feels" should be italicized, methinks:
(This I only feels light, I can tell
Ah well. I suppose I'll delete this or affix an addendum when the changes are made.